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Gamez4Free · Postby **Gamez4Free** » Sat Mar 11, 2006 10:19 pm

It is a bit too long for my liking. But I read most of it.

Pretty good!

welterde · Postby **welterde** » Sat Mar 11, 2006 10:40 pm

wont read it. too small(the Font), i cant even see the letters.
Ok its great ;-P, thanks to Kate i could read it

dunetrooper · Postby **dunetrooper** » Sat Mar 11, 2006 10:53 pm

I think it's pretty decent. Though you could've made the font a little bit easier for reading pleasure. But other than that ya, I liked it.

Babylon5 · Postby **Babylon5** » Sat Mar 11, 2006 11:46 pm

It was pretty good, although slightly cliched

Babylon5 · Postby **Babylon5** » Sun Mar 12, 2006 11:54 am

Yeah, it was a little bit predictable is what I mean.

Babylon5 · Postby **Babylon5** » Sun Mar 12, 2006 3:06 pm

It was still amusing though

vooshy · Postby **vooshy** » Mon Mar 13, 2006 1:55 am

love the busted ovaries, good story. keep them coming, or begin writing books, because u clearly have a talent.

coldhand · Postby **coldhand** » Mon Mar 13, 2006 2:46 am

I liked it, but it moved a bit fast. It was like reading the first 6 chapters in note form. Id like to see more characted background so i could feel some empathy towards them, but its a good starter project.

SedgReborn · Postby **SedgReborn** » Mon Mar 20, 2006 3:48 pm

I loved it, I can't wait to hear what happens next!

Maelia · Postby **Maelia** » Tue Mar 21, 2006 7:08 am

Pretty good stuff, i read integrally
keep up the good work

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