Fourward Ho! The Journey of Four, A Mighty DG.

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Postby NeatNit » Tue Jul 21, 2009 7:58 pm

red rouge wrote:as the triangles of reality came back into context four reilised where he was.
as he stood at the bottom of the portal to the soul repositery four remembered the stories he had heard and how squads called down fire from above with the ledrendery space invaders but that was gone now. the chosen one who used the task manager to clear the virus from darwinia had gone he saw a shimmer in the corner of his eye but thought nothing of it as he started looking into the soul repository he saw th hard drive a thing no darwinian was ment to see


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Postby red rouge » Wed Jul 22, 2009 9:45 pm

thanks
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Postby red rouge » Mon Jul 27, 2009 7:56 pm

noooo no entrys for 5 days this thread must live some one post for the love of god and give life to four
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Postby NeatNit » Mon Jul 27, 2009 9:45 pm

Maybe later.
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Postby xander » Mon Jul 27, 2009 10:04 pm

red rouge wrote:noooo no entrys for 5 days this thread must live some one post for the love of god and give life to four

Then write something.

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Postby red rouge » Tue Jul 28, 2009 4:38 pm

fine then

before four realised what was happening he found himself floting up to the soul repositery, into the hard drive, he wasnt afraid he was brave and coragouse and he would find the answers to his questions, but then he thought back to the fleet of space ships waiting to attack darwinia. he thought of all the lives that would be lost in the great struggle to protect the wor torn world he thought of the green and yellow tribe hand in hand again he thought of the greens using there WMD against a commen foe and the reds stoping there never ending campiagn to capture the green technolegy, and he thought that peace would engulf darwinia but only after a bitter battle in which generations of lives would be lost. but then he saw what revelations plans where as a massive swarm of soul destroyers swooped down towards the field of never ending dawn he new how many pinks rested there and could already see the whight fog in his mind but that all faded away as he found himself in the soul repository.
and he thought that maybey the multiwinians may win as there souls would be resycled down at the biosphere ( the only place of peace in darwinia as the truce of "the island of peace" was passed meaning each tribe had a spawn point which it could use to transport there souls to major battle places) but then the harvesters of the infected came and slowly the soul reposetory was eaten and all hope seemed losed.
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Postby red rouge » Thu Jul 30, 2009 2:55 pm

as four waited to be transported down to the reciever he could see all of multiwinia he could see the blue tribe falling under the might of the infected's formations the turrets could only hold out for so long before the first infected came and over threw there bases, four could see the green WMD bieng captured by the cyan army and used agianst there creators, he could see far and wide the skirrge and there blitz of tanks and armours storming the islands of darwinia. four remembered back to revelation and how he thought that the armys had been destroyed but the orbiting space ships must of help many millions of the astranged being to. he new of only one tribe still in full strength and tried to think of another way to stop the incursion but he could not. four had to go and find the futurewinians.....

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Postby Tufto » Mon Aug 03, 2009 6:29 pm

But Four could not escape. He was surrounded on all sides by the souls of his brethren. He could only watch as the hordes of Revelation stormed across Multwinia, corrupting and destroying everywhere in site. Multwinia was dying, and there was nothing Four could do.

But hope was not lost, for Four was ascended. He was above the others. And he was not merely a dead soul like those around him. He was the Great Four, and he would escape from the Soul Repository, and enter the skies.

But the question was how...
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Postby red rouge » Tue Aug 04, 2009 9:39 pm

but as he tried to think of another way out he saw a crate faling through the soul repository he grabed it and started downloading the data as he stood there downloading the crate he could see the cyan armys using the runes to destroy spawnpoints a most unholy act. four opened the crate expecting revelation to pop out but finnaly he had some good look, the large circular shape of the futerwinian ufo loomed above him and he was pulled up by its tractor beam into the heart of the ufo as he asended he fell unconsious as the the digital air was getting fin so high up from the air purifier next to the genoratror as he fell unconsios he once again saw that little shgape in the corner of his eye but took no notice of it as he was now asleep...unconsious and he dreamed of what the futurwinians might to to him......
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Postby Tufto » Wed Aug 05, 2009 10:32 am

After a few hours, Four woke up. And he saw the leader of the Futurewinians standing before him, and he was not scared

But the Futurewinian leader did not seem pleased, and Four became scared.

And Four looked down upon Darwinia-and saw that the Virus had covered every inch of is surface, and that the Darwinians were no more.....

And Four asked the leader of the Futurewinians his name.

And the leader of the Futurewinians, despite his ferocious anger, replied, "There are some who call me-Tim."
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Postby eos » Mon Aug 17, 2009 9:46 pm

Four remained afeared (being much worse than afraid!), but his fear was much greater. The land below was a swarming mass of black, and almost none of his homeland remained to be seen beneath the living carpet. Several pylons and receivers were toppled by the sheer force of viri being piled on them. Some of the Viri were growing larger, glutting themselves on the falling souls.
A polite cough was heard. Despite the heavy armor, powerpack and subverter, Tim had-quite freakily, walked over to a hatch silently. Four understood, and walked over. Tim lifted the hatch, and the pair descended into the UFO.

They walked for miles, along clean white corridors. Occasionally, they passed another Futurewinian. Some were less armoured, and carried tools instead of subverters, whilst overs bore larger subverters and, obviously, enlarged powerpacks. Some wore gargantuan but silent armour, but not enough to equal Tim. Clearly, Tim was in charge.
It was during this walking that Four became
really afraid. He knew the dread tales of the Futurewinians, and they were contianed with Revelation, but he knew that under normal circumstances by now he would be in silent armour. What did Tim want?
They turned into the bridge Overhead, the stars were approaching-clearly, they were taking off. Around the walls, several unarmed Futurewinians sat, hard wired into their systems. Tim sat on a chair on a raised dias.
"I must appologise," he-hissed? No, it wasn't hostile enough to be a hiss. "For not explaining why I have brought you aboard. But you are in deep trouble."
You didn't need to be Prometheus to figure out what Four was being blamed for.
"Come on, you can't be blaming ME for what's going on down there!" He cried. "I know snap all about the residual code! How could I penetrate the Multiwinian shield?"
"Explaination," the monotone Tim began. "Before Multwininia was contained, All Darwinians, along with several clean Ghostwinians and X-copies were eveacuated, yes?"
Four nodded. "And Striker and Prometheus. They were regarded as too valuable to abandon."
Tim continued. "As the evacuation rockets left Multiwinia, the Doctor had already activated the containment field. In order to ensue you could escape, the Doctor placed codings in the nose lights that would allow you to pass through, but keep anything else, like the green fanatics or the Skirrge within."
"So Revelation found an abandoned rocket?" Four mused. "I always wondered why the ghosts always yelled at us when we left stuff in orbit."
Tim shook his pale head. "The shield was accidentally weakened every time a clean soul passed through. Revelation became aware of this, but there was nothing he could do. When you passed from the new Darwinia to Multiwinia, you accidentaly bypassed the shield. When you crossed back from Revelations' flagship, the
Ark of Hades, your soul passed through the shield, and broke it."
"Oops."
"Indeed. Luckily, our fleet was on manuveres near the shield when it failed. We sent a distress signal to the IOverride core, and the Doctor understood. Communications suggest they modified the
Argonort defence station into a giant rocket and evacuated 1567 Darwinians, 142 X-copies plus Prometheus and 59 Ghosts plus Striker."
Four frowned. "But there are millions of us!"
"Correct. The idea was a mass teleportation from the city of Darwinopolis, using a wide spectrum beam. Unfortunately, the scanners on the
Ark of Hades saw this and launched an inferno bombardment, killing all within. Those outside the city didn't make it to the evacuation points. If they're lucky, the virus will have eaten them. If not, the Evilwinians may throw them to the Soul Destroyers, or the Skirrge will turn them into their sadistic playthings. We must put them behind us, regrettably until we can reach Korgo."
"What the @*&^'s that?" asked Four, shocked by this loss.
"A solar system in the recently created Darwinia Galaxy, an experiment the doctor just activated" Tim explained. "At the heart of the galaxy, Darwinia and Multiwinia. There are thousands of systems, each one with many small planets and a "star" (soul repository) in the middle. Korgo is where the evacuees are going. Korgo is where we shall go. And where you will answer for you crime against Darwinia before John Henry Sepulveda himself."
"@*&^" repeated Four.
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Postby eos » Tue Aug 18, 2009 2:18 pm

Sorry about the long post. With my Aspergers syndrome, it's a force of habit. If anyone gets cross with me, please use the official pitying Revelation smilie:

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Postby eos » Fri Aug 21, 2009 1:32 am

Across the void the UFO sped. Four timed it to two days. From what Tim had said, clearly the escapees had already set up shop in the system. Why was the UFO taking so long? Four guessed the engines on the rockets were faster.

Four woke up with a green glow blanketing his face. Groggily, he stood up and then sat down again. Then he stood up quickly, banged his head on the overhead locker and blacked out. Two hours later, he woke up and looked out the port hole.
He could see a glowing green star. Clearly, they had arrived at the Korgo system. These blank souls must be waiting for the first Darwinian colonists. Around the star, Four saw the new worlds. One planet had a large sphere orbiting it, and a trail of souls leeched towards the sphere. A receiver satellite, clearly. The breeder points must be on the world.
The UFO turned, and Four saw the world they were approaching. It was a mix of desert, greenland and water. They were half on the darkside and half on the light. On the darkside, lights could be seen-the escapees!
A crackly voice came over the intercom. "We are now approaching Orskar. Planetfall in twenty minuites."
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Postby red rouge » Sat Aug 29, 2009 9:40 am

as the ufo landed on orskar four woke up and heard tims voice calling him to the door "thank god your ok four the multiwinians in orskar would have gone besserk if they couldn't watch you get executed"
"but i thought there would be a trial i could be found inocent it was an acident after all"replied four.
"im sorry but the entier jury lost loved ones because of you "acident" they will vote guilty without a second thought" said tim in a flat emotionless voise, four could tell he was not sorry atall and would kill him on the spot if the situation was different.
As four walked out of the space ship he could see crowds of multiwinians booing him there where atleast 200 of each race in the mob so atleast the racisim of old multiwinia was gone. four then tripped over and as he fell he took out a subverter he found on the ufo and switched in to /darwinian/ he pointed it at tim and shouted "nobody move or space man tim here gets turned into a darwinian" this was a great threat indead because a darwinian soul could not be prossesed by the new soul resievers or incubators. the crowd on the other hand saw now imediat threat of being converted but a slow murmer spread through the crowd as the intention of four became clear. tim motioned for four to be shot but the swift four shot tim and in a flash of light he turned into a green darwinian the futeristic armour now looking stupid on his feeble body the crowd gasped as tim came into view as a small feeble darwinian istead of the mighty captin of a ufo then as four threw a grenadede the police escort that was meatn to take him to court showed up. the masive blast from behind four shoked them as four was catapulted over there heads and into the city and the a wave of guilt spread over four as he reilised tim could never be reincarnated he would be cursed to float in the soul reposetor forever....



extract from the book of four
and the mighty ufo's will rain down armys from another planet and the great creator will rain down hell on the evill ones and the balance of the world will hang in the out come of a single battle as the cyan leage faces the futurwinians for the control of the god dish and once again shall the squads return to fight for the multiwinians but they shall be corupted and used by the forsaken ones and the antiant skirge will bring forth a antiant and devestating wepon capable on destroying armys an instant leaving a blanket of white ghosts over entire hexegons of land.

the dairy entry of general karlos in the last few days of peace
the power of this new wepon will win the war for us the yellow multiwinians before it has even begun as we all know war is coming the armys of each faction are lined up against there borders and are preparing to capture the few mines that are left to create the polygones they need for there empires but we shall destroy the blue nation in our preemtive atack and we shall walk to there mines unaposed and from there the red will crumle beneath our super wepon leaving no one to stop us taking there prized WMD. althoughy olnly a fraction as powerfull as my super wepon they can be modified to release the new power that i have made and olnly yellow will remaine. aslong as they dont find ont where its hid...

the diary entery of head of wepons steve
it was horible the blues this mourning raided the science department they kill all of the people who new how to use my superwepon i told general karlos they werent safe but that stuck up half blood wouldt listen he probably got it from his red farther he dyes his body yellow every morning to avoide suspision. but anyway back to the matter at hand now that the super wepon is usless to us we might as we'll bury it and bury it deep with the instructions manual it tooke 7 years to teach one person how to use it and it needs 50 we dont have that much time now war is coming we will just have to fight with laser and grenade...
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Postby Tufto » Sat Aug 29, 2009 11:35 am

And as Four was catapulted into the city below, he smashed through the roof of a large building.

And in this building there was a vast computer, controlling all the power in the city.

And Four had hit it, and it had been destroyed.

And a hundred Multiwininans stared in shocked silence at him.

And Four said,"Hi. I'm selling these fine leather jackets..."

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